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Launch: 'Grass Notes' by Sarah Day
Tasmanian Poetry Festival, Launceston:
Friday 2nd October 2009
When I lived at Risdon Vale
– and Risdon Vale is like Ravenswood a housing department subdivision – I used
to catch the bus home. The bridge was down and it was a longer trip than it might have
been otherwise.
Somewhere along the route two
darked haired girls would board the bus and they were different from the rest of us on the
bus.
They were noticeable.
They were quiet and contained,
and they didn’t go to Risdon Vale but got off shortly after crossing the Bailey
Bridge and headed up to Old Beach.
One of these girls was Sarah
Day.
Now I know everybody here
tonight catches a West Launceston bus now and then in the hope that they may be sharing it
with Tim Thorne but looking back I reckon that it was pretty special to share the bus with
this writer, this poet.
Apart from the fact that I read
Johnny I Hardly Knew You by Edna O'Brien I remember little else about those
trips.
From the beginning of reading Grass
Notes I thought about those times and wondered if Sarah collected material from riding
on the bus across the Derwent River, whether some of the poems had their genesis then.
I suspect the answer is yes
– Sarah would have been what we may call "at an impressionable age" but I
also know it could only have been a small phase in the lifelong collection of material
that contributes to this poet having a fine voice, an acute eye and a powerful message.
Being given a book of poems to
read – to launch – is different from being asked to read a poem.
Grass Notes like lots of
collections of verse has a tone and the reader swims through this tone stroke by stroke -
poem by poem.
The whole collection has a feel
but it is the poems, one by one, that make me say ‘ah!’ aloud after the last
line.
Each poem has its own setting,
its own unique quality, its own story or message or theme yet there is a commonality that
requires the book to be taken as an achievement as well as it being necessary to see what
each poem has achieved.
I think it is the sign of a
mature, accomplished poet that the poems successfully collaborate with one another within
the pages of Grass Notes for the book to be a statement, an achievement.
In this book some themes run
through the text joining one poem to another, some words are common and shared between
poems, so that as you work through the text, page after page, there is both an incremental
and expediential satisfaction and enjoyment in consuming all of Grass Notes.
Of course in a poem you have
individual lines, phrases and even single words that are all skilfully selected and placed
together to enforce high level cerebral activity that is both the challenge and the union
between the reader and the author, between the poet and her audience.
I can suggest lines to you
–
In Observations about Rain 2
‘These drops thud like
water bombs on the warm concrete’
Or the last line of Spring
Morning
‘A hen allows itself the
luxury of a slow blink.’
I can tell you Sarah turns the
everyday into the special - the spectacular: the poem Present Time has a fruit tree
pruner, the narrator thinking about
- time and the repetitious effect
years of pruning
- happening on bright sparkling
brilliant day;
so bright you blink reading the
lines.
I can tell you some of the
poems are wonderful stories: Biology Class is one such story – the class is
inhabited by ‘Ms’, the teacher, and the poem swings partially on the wonderful
word pluck – a sheep’s pluck.
My reaction was to squirm and
it wasn’t an ‘ah’ poem but an ‘err’ poem.
And in finishing this
recommendation, this launch, I would like to mention the poem 'Swift Parrots' which
begins,
Somewhere on
someone’s desk, there’ll be a map of these quiet hills
This took me back to a story
Helen Gee told me that she had taken a map of ‘these quiet hills’ into John
Gay’s office and pointed out to Mr Gay that an intended road through a forest was not
necessary and just further vandalism.
It remains intended and as yet
unbuilt.
But: was Sarah in the room when
Helen was telling me this? No.
Did Helen tell her the same
story? I don’t know.
I suspect that this line, this
poem, is the product of a lifetime of careful observation both by eye and by heart and the
skill to sculpt words in black ink onto white paper, so that we the reader (or listener as
the case may be) will revisit these words many times and share many times in the genius
that is the craft of Sarah Day.
That tonight and for many
nights over many years the air will absorb the little sounds of satisfaction produced by
the readers of these poems.
These Grass Notes.
I encourage you to take Grass
Notes on and experience the thrills for yourselves.